Black Poetry : ...labels. (working title)

[GA_Sunshyne]

aight ya'll... this is my 1st attempt at "off da top" flowin'.
you know... where you just type it & let it go! so be gentle!


i’ve heard songs that say—

“I just wanna be…
there's no need to put
titles on you & me”

…&

“If we label this…
then picture what we
might lose”

& i have to agree
‘cause this thing between
you & me transcends the
ordinary… it’s much greater
than others being able to
characterize or typify
us as just a couple…
i mean you’re
my brother
my father
my friend
my lover
sometimes you’re
my sister (or)
my mother
other times
you’re me (then)
i am you
(meanwhile our feelings grow)
& i don’t want to ruin this…
so lets just loving-ly exist
side by side
hearts & souls entwined
until our time together
expires or is required to
renew itself… contInUoUS-ly
(you feelin’ me?)


© SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved

 

[Danilyn]

I'm feelin you! And to an extent I agree; however, without labels, u find yourself in a gray area with no defined boundaries and somebody's toes are bound to get stepped on. Loved what u did with this girlfriend. The poetic muse has taken root in your soul and we are all being blessed because of it! U know I love ya!

 

[$$RICH$$]

smiling @ dis one

sunshyne u just pose a piece of love
thats hard to find i agree wit ya flava of flow
write da scribe u vibe in my mental sistah!!

 

[Afridancr]

Ooooooohhh...

yeah big sis PH...I'm feelin you!!

Aminata

 

[GA_Sunshyne]

AlwaysThanks.


Dani. thanks lil sis for voicing your opinion on this
piece... it was really an off da top thang... you know i neva
post from work... but i was sitting at my desk listenin' to
Balil... (track #13)... & this is what came out!!

$$RICH-NE$$. thank you darlin'... i'm glad you
enjoyed my flow!! you always make me shyne!!

Afri. silly chile!! i know you know that i know...
that you feelin' me!! when we love fa sho fa sho... we
on't be needin' no titles! thanks sister dear!!