Black Poetry : la familia (kwansaba)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 7, 2009.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spider web trapped spun dead hopes
    Unity lost purpose given away faith
    Burden ridden guilty turning past history
    Father less child grow old alone loved
    Where broken, loop holes, fill forgive ness
    Blood thick, clear like water, thirst quencher
    Friends keep sane, while chaos erupts thru
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This one just felt sad to me.

    Trapped, Abused, Hopeless.


    But thank God for any brief respite. Friends are Angels.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    daroc

    Sometimes you have to "...wonder how you got over."

    Nice poet.

    Thanks for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    sometime we all feel the hurst of such pain well felt sis
     
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    hmmm....

    ...and, thus, i meditate.

    the river floweth.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow... very deep



    indeed....


    Father less chile
    Smiles
    Defined of self love
    Mind body soul unified
    To define purpose
    Inside ones inclined to search
    Where the hurt is
    History lays my sense of pride
    Face down where the dirt is
    A new life to emerge
    Found a heart where the worth is
    Through chaos
    Love showered
    A flower
    All it took was
    A friend
    2 say
    Forgive them

    True,
    They know not what they do
     
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