Black Poetry : L.Y.F.E. (Loving You For Eternity)

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  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    I looked into your eyes
    and watched your soul cry.
    I kissed your lips
    and felt your heart bleed.
    I held your hand
    and felt the cold shiver that lingered in pain.
    I walked with you
    and saw your knees buckle.
    Baby, belive me.
    I know you're tired.
    And I know it hurts.
    But rest assured that I will never leave you.
    I've got your back.
    See this is love......and love doesn't leave.
    It doesn't get up and walk away when it's tired.
    It doesn’t take a leave of absence.
    I'm here baby and I'm all yours.
    This is a partnership and I'm in it 'till the end.
    You don't have to do it alone.
    There's two people that make up the ONE spirit we share.
    If you fall, I’ll pick you up.
    When I cry, you wipe my tears.
    No matter what, we're always there for each other.
    So let me be all that I can to you.
    Let me ease your pain.
    Let me calm your soul.
    Let me heal your wounded heart.
    Let me bring warmth to your hands.
    Let me hold you up.
    I Love You- so let me.

    Leslie Jaimel Wilson
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH!! Now dats what I'm talking about!!! Love and Devotion!! The Bishop loves this piece.....
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    I'm witcha Bishop ...
    this is what it's all about

    another tight peace Mysslez
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Give it Up!

    This says it all--commitment doesn't go anywhere--it is there for the long run and you have said it very well--I liked this piece--it flowed and makes a clear statement--Amun-Ra :star:


    Read my column today on Lesbian lovers--AMun-Ra :cool:
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply

    Beautiful...It's nice to have someon who you can care so deeply for :luvv:
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautifull .... :huh:
    it brought back memorys of how i feld for a man a long time ago..


    unfortunatly it wasnt enough...


    but its beautifull to read that people still dare... :love:
    beautifull just beautifull sister...
    write on..


    and welcome :wave:



    Love Libertylady
     
  7. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful, from beginning to end!

    Stay focused!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that sounds like true love to me, feelin this flow.
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so touching.
    I love yr devtion 2 yr
    significant other.
    I t is truly endearing and sweet.
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a good piece right here

    i like the repetition at the end..i wonder would it would sound like if u did a piece like that the whole way threw....

    nice job

    UPin
     
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