Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Oct 24, 2006.
THANKS FOR READING WHEN IT WAS POSTED
Mmmmm! I think what i like the most about this is the tension throughout the piece. It's like its love but it isn't sort of thing. Almost like saying I'll wash your clothes, but yo behind better dry em! Definitely well written and the ending was the rinse cycle. It left absorbed and stuck to the wall. Great Piece of Poetry!
u took me inside ya room and allowed me to see da love u didn't want
awesome scribing sis......
Tha-Emissary I had to reach inside and pull this out I am glad you liked what was produced Thank you for your kind words
$$Rich$$ Now you know that I always have to give you a peek bro!
I know the feeling.
But, sometimes, the love
u don't want can be the love
that u need.
Love grows from roots that stem
deep in the heart and though the petals may fall
the seeds run deep-rooted in ones soul...
To walk this way but leave thy heart
is to not walk at all
Sweet baby_face You know that is very true indeed sistah! Glad you enjoyed it girl.
smoothsoul-love your flo back Thanx
but whats in your pants
gives you no real chance
at getting my heart
you need more than that
i heard that
but the body yearns too
definitely feeling this here poet
DSS- Thanks for checkin out this flo bro'
I am glad you felt me here.
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