Black Poetry : l.o.v.e. i did not want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR READING WHEN IT WAS POSTED
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmm! I think what i like the most about this is the tension throughout the piece. It's like its love but it isn't sort of thing. Almost like saying I'll wash your clothes, but yo behind better dry em! Definitely well written and the ending was the rinse cycle. It left absorbed and stuck to the wall. Great Piece of Poetry!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u took me inside ya room and allowed me to see da love u didn't want
    awesome scribing sis......
     
  4. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha-Emissary I had to reach inside and pull this out I am glad you liked what was produced Thank you for your kind words

    $$Rich$$ Now you know that I always have to give you a peek bro!

    Sweettee, love
     
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    I know the feeling.
    But, sometimes, the love
    u don't want can be the love
    that u need.
    L.O.V.E. this!!!!
    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    Love grows from roots that stem
    deep in the heart and though the petals may fall
    the seeds run deep-rooted in ones soul...
    To walk this way but leave thy heart
    is to not walk at all
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet baby_face You know that is very true indeed sistah! Glad you enjoyed it girl.

    smoothsoul-love your flo back Thanx

    Sweettee, love
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea

    but whats in your pants
    gives you no real chance
    at getting my heart

    you need more than that

    i heard that

    but the body yearns too


    sometimes

    definitely feeling this here poet

    yes
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSS- Thanks for checkin out this flo bro'
    I am glad you felt me here.

    Sweettee, love