Black Poetry : l never wrote her poetry.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Jun 23, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l would have written her poetry then
    but for some reason
    l could not pick up my pen

    l felt insecure
    b/c nothing is for sure except that l loved her
    and wanted to spend forever with her
    l understood we both had to pursue college
    and a job here or there thus parting ways
    but hoped...
    l hoped desperately
    that open opportunities would not send even her heart far
    and elsewhere
    l blamed time...
    l hated time and his friend, seasons
    They were enemies of my reason and my purpose
    and treated my heart like it was worthless
    as she went away leaving my soul to bleed
    l wanted her here
    she wanted me there
    my girl, my heart...
    she use to wear her engagement ring everywhere

    l would have written her poetry then
    but for some reason
    l could not pick up my pen
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...

    But the pen was right there.....

    I'm feelin it j'hiah :( :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'h..............man u still amaze me wit ya pen
    that's now in ya hand .......u picked up!
    Tyte scribe poet!
     
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    this is tyte! wow...i'm likin' this!
     
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    Wow...this was truly felt. Great Flow!
     
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    Wow.....this piece here was nicely written........Great job!!!!
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. well its never too late to write her poetry... great flow.
     
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    ****, you shoulda picked up the pen. ****!!

    Kickin, reality real hard in the chest!

    I feel ya J
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j

    always always always pick up the pen, even if you never get to share it with her, always pick up that pen.....




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