Black Poetry : "l love you." (j'hiah & epiphany)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if day passed to night
    and night to day...
    rather the sky is blue
    and tomorrow is gray...
    if heaven and earth were to pass away
    then only my love would be here to stay

    l love you


    [COLOR=sky blue]

    be it Summer or Winter
    Spring or Fall
    rather the seasons change
    even lingers along
    If the sun eclipse and burns today
    my love for you will never stray

    l love you
    [/COLOR]


    may l take you, my queen
    to the peace of the shore?
    where the winds don't blow
    and the seas can't roar...
    through times of perils, disease and war
    l'll be your shelter queen- just open my door

    l love you infinitely


    [COLOR=sky blue]

    l will uplift you from
    life's challenge and pain
    if the clouds shall rumble
    vanquish the rain
    l'll give you sanctuary
    Come to me, dear King
    my heart is yours eternally

    l love you endlessly
    [/COLOR]
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh. This is so poetically sweet.
    Thanks for making me smile :)

    *Emma*
     
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    Thanx Euphoria,
    For taking the time to
    read and respond...it's appreciated.


    J'hiah, you are so poetically savvy,
    thanx, for the opportunity to collab with you.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx epiphany- this is only a surface of our collective skillz.
    thanx for vibin' with me.

    Euphoria, $$RICH$$, Sherykah,
    love.
    '

    God's peace.................
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight!
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the great return is coming :wink:
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    through times of perils, disease and war
    l'll be your shelter queen- just open my door.....
    l will uplift you from
    life's challenge and pain....
    this is love...oh how it pleases my heart to see such passion in love that shall never grow apart...this was lovefilled...thank you so much...ifeelgood:heart: :heart: :heart: :love: :love:
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was indeed heartfelt... y'all keep it flowin... peace
     
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