Black Poetry : l died for her

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l died for her...

    and became a sacrifice an offering of
    the understanding her heart needed
    when no one else heeded her innermost call...

    l took the fall as she struck me with the bolts of her past
    and bitter displacements
    yes, l took the whip of her wrath and each lash was for her path
    to peace

    l died time and time again and for each breath taken from me
    gave her life and life again

    what she needed was to be held in a warm place b/c the world- her world was so so cold and my shelter kept her out of harm's way..

    for this is my love l vowed to her before my God- l bowed to her
    before my God

    l am her altarjust as she is my soul's sanctuary bearing
    each other's cross always....

    l died for her...




     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** this is beautiful!! truly mean that!! digging this fa sho


    am
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is love..raw and unleashed on a bruised heart/soul..

    a beautiful peace..

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man j'h truely u did what no other could dis was str8 awesome
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx..

    love and sacrifice are inseperable :wink: this l know.

    nfinite......
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohmigod, this was so beautiful and the passion & emotion so tangible. This is one of the most wonderful & sincere love pieces I have ever read. Filled with so much deep & pure love. This was excellent!
     
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    beautiful
     
  8. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now what does one say in response to that? This is love. This is beauty!

    Serenity...
    She
     
  9. lil'MizzUnique

    lil'MizzUnique Active Member MEMBER

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    That was incredible , breath taking...
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In so few words you captured the essence
    of love given. May you receive such love
    if you aren't already!
    Peace to you, J!
     
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