Black Poetry : L.A.Z.Y

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 19, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i used to rest on vibes
    that cleared my mynd bettah
    than then my visit to mary-ju-wanna
    on a soft summah day....

    i would try and reach the sun
    with my fingers inclined to make
    sunspots its surface.....

    relinquishing disturbances
    that messed up my train of though...

    L.....A.....Z.....Y
    do i have to get out of bed?
    nnawww i'll just linger
    here in this place awhile...

    *yyyyaaaaawwwwnnnnnn*
    i looked at how cute my feet where....
    tickling the air with them
    cutting through someones dreams
    foiling the Sandmans plot....

    i used to think of things like....
    How the hell DID David kill Goliath
    wit that slingshot?

    nevermind....


    i'll wash the dishes latterrrr....
    i like it here...
    leaves were fiery red...
    and i had not a care....

    can't get up,
    i'm still dreamin,
    slippin on tyme,
    trippin on nickels
    and dimes that were
    slaves in my pocket....

    i couldn't move my limbs
    i didn't want too...
    i was transparent...

    i existed on two planes...

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  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see....
    this is why they should legalize marijuana
    lol j/k
    Very nice drop
    like the way you wrote this
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks twision.....
    :heart:
    -story
     
  4. Kamau~

    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    this was funny...i have had lazy days almost like this...straight lamping...i feel the vibe
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanks for the Kamau...
    :uzi:
    -story
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    ts
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, those lazy dazy mornings, when you notice the things that you're usually too busy to notice. You captured this feeling wonderfully, story.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:hno:

    :smokin: I thought it was already legal....lQQkin..uh oh *hidin my stash*.....lol
    heeeeeeeeey story...aka hot sauce...chicken fajita...nacho bel grande light on the beans...lol...like the way you dropped this one..love to see my young people puttin it down!
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]'s chicken fajita....lol mmmaaannn gurll u a trip...thanks for the support yall...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  10. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting....

    :peace: Thought this was cool, save the reference to Mary Jane.... Perhaps it's just my big sisterly instincts coming through, but uh..... well..... hmmmmm.....

    Peace and Blessings
    Clio