Black Poetry : kumplexshun odyssey

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    kumplexshun odyssey

    you know i...
    masked my delivery to spend time vacantly
    and rested on shallow casper clouds
    drip wise souls & melons
    that envy the midnight eavesdrops
    someone caught my mumur satin orgasms...
    netopia fell on my expressions with half pulses,
    silhoettes patterned between that common place...
    deep moistures frequently traveled with engulfed blows,
    your unrelenting canal salivations on black male
    positioned thicker vessel quest
    sighs looking down at me
    pleasureable sounds of being femme soaked...
    motion...
    i shall taste the immense sweetness once more
    before lullabies calm you
    a good place to be lost in blu`

    Jahvandus Kwu

    (c) 2002 ObsidianSoul Publishings
     
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    obsidiansoul
    you rain misty
    and complete
    upon my mind
    soaking me
    inside out
    obsidiansoul
    you reign high
    above in
    places most
    have yet to
    think of
    obsidiansoul
    you rein my
    thoughts
    with words
    tethered tightly
    to my third
    eye

    forcing me
    2 C


    it's always a pleasure when you stop in, my eloquent bruvuh...

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poet u scribe a masterpiece of perfection !
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my. I think I got turned on or something close to it. Scribe on. Style is commendable, no doubt.
     
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    Nice fo' real !!!

    blak
     
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    in memory of ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    R.I.P. poet...........
     
  8. herlove

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    yeah lost ........ in this flow

    somewhere out there were silence is birthed and reborn without blemish or scorn ........
     
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