Black Poetry : KOUNTRY LIFE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kountrysoul, Oct 18, 2004.

  1. kountrysoul

    kountrysoul Member MEMBER

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    kountry taste,
    wagon on the road.
    eating sweet watermelon,
    juices restin' on my nose.
    kick back relaxin',
    on my 20 foot porch.
    no cigars no cigs,
    just pipes--yo! pass the torch!
    jaw jackin' with neighbors,
    family and friends.
    kountry style livin',
    oh how sweet to be the perfect sin.
    awl nawl i didn't forget about you,
    cuz you's like my backbone.
    my key to the outhouse,
    and the latch to my home.
    my grass in the field,
    and yada yada this.
    blah blah blah,
    yea i love you-that's pretty much sums it.
    but like i said kountry to the soul,
    you can't take it outta me.
    but you can try if you want to,
    but i'm tellin' you-i'm gonna show you how we do it in the kountry!!!!!!!! :horse:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome poet...I see this is your first post... :hiya:
    and an entertainingly cultural country piece...it is indeed
    with all the flavor of the country captured so perfectly...
    I know what you speak of all too well...
    and the city will never compare...never

    Love the way you put this down...I will be sure
    to look for more work from you!

    Kick your feet up and make yourself at home...
    We're all family here!
    Peace & One luv
    Sage
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right set the stage and the path to the hillside
    love this flow
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a vivid description of just kickin it, southern style. Loved this laid back flavor. Welcome poet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm kickin n diggin your smooth vibe. Welcome!
     
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