Black Poetry : Kosmic Rhapsody

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jahvandus, Apr 26, 2001.

  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    My soil…
    Inkwell ebony subdued
    Character black beyond the sun
    Moon licks
    Nipple waves
    Depths below sensual

    Sucks

    Gritty palm dust brown
    Earth-toned
    Spine travels
    Caramel grinding through time
    Tongue positions
    Blessed creases
    Splits of ripe forbidden
    Areola winds
    Soft center butter core
    Mouth
    Drips
    Willow smooth oral songs
    Twirling cotton candy myths
    Bits and pieces
    Kiwi clutches and releases
    Humid sheets
    All over my soul
    Deeper shall I dig
    Your nesting place now exposed

    Jahvandus Kwu

    (c)2001 ObsidianSoul Publishings
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  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This be

    on FYA for real you know this is my favorite here

    "Twirling cotton candy myths
    Bits and pieces
    Kiwi clutches and releases
    Humid sheets
    All over my soul
    Deeper shall I dig
    Your nesting place now exposed"


    Sounds like a good time of love play to me. UMMMMMM Delicious Jah



    One
     
  3. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u r amazing

    nuff said
     
  4. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    outta mind

    zorb...i know you feel me sistah!!!!!!!

    star...where's my breakfast girl!!!!!!!!!!!!

    jah
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jah,

    this scribe was tight. I read this piece too my rhythm and **** your piece has inspired me to create. Keep doing things on a "Kosmic" level and leave heads amongst the stars.

    one love,blak
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jah, this heyah is simply off the hinges. very enjoyable, it is.
     
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    in memory of ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was like WHOA! I love the expression and imagination. Great Scribe!
     
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    WOW...this was incredible.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    R.I.P...................Poet !
     
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