Black Poetry : Kool-aid

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Oct 5, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You gat me,
    Trippin, while sippin,
    On kool-aid,
    Tryin to savor da flava,
    Not wanting any to waste,
    But wishin,
    That whatever I taste,
    Would be you,
    As my tongue embrace,
    Da sweetness,
    My weakness…
    My thoughts…
    Would make you blush,
    Oh I’m sorry,
    Must be da sugar rush…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    kool-aid smile
    what a rush this was very tasty
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet! I love your Kool-Aid.
     
  4. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey thanks all....yea da kool-aid was pretty tasty..lol. Hey Rich I dunno if you noticed that I stole a little bit of your style by replacin the with da.... You do it so well....please forgive me sir....lol!
     
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    Niiice...

    May I ask what's the flavor? And remember, red's a color. :D
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sweet and playful. Enjoyed the vibe.
     
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    oh..those Kool-Aid days........memories stained on the brain jes like Kool-Aid:)
    Nice flow!
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i was feelin dat, i mean kool-aid iz da junk, i mean datz my crunkjuice..lol no lie, but yo flo was tyght so flo on with nonstop

    blackluv and bp
     
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