Quiet Poetry Lounge : Known Inherently, Felt Intuitively

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Known inherently
    felt intuitively
    Paths taken together
    yet apart
    who can explain
    when one heart
    entwines with another
    sight unseen
    what does it mean
    when the truth
    is known inherently
    felt intuitively
    this undeniable bond
    some sort of incantation
    put into motion
    with a splendid devotion
    beyond explanation
    like streams of sunlight
    breaking thru an otherwise
    cloudy day, the radiance of
    your essence reaches mine
    utterly divine
    My morning dew evaporates
    up into your eternal sky
    no need to ponder why
    as your rays forever beckon me
    Known inherently
    felt intuitively
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the full rapture of hearts felt
    from afar and apart yet together
    i like how this was laid out sis...
    awesomely well done like sweet music
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So lovely to know that you enjoyed this tune Rich. Thank you for responding so brotha.
     
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    Beautiful piece Walt, it was warm and touching. And in my book, ...Skillfully written.
     
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    :crying: ...this??? was absolutely beautiful

    ...now someone please get me a tissue and I'm serious :cry:

    Love this poem!
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I definately felt that one watz. Very nice as usual girl. Keep doin whatcha doin. :jumping:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you queent for letting me know you felt the warmness in this, and your opinion is a valued one.
    Sage, thank you for saying how much this touched you. Appreciated.
    Thank you kente417mojo, glad to know you felt the words here brotha. Peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling the warmth from this as i re-read
    surely this one go deep most welcome sista
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know that this was deeply felt, for it was deeply written. Thank you Rich.
     
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    Don't know how I missed this one, but very glad $$RICH$$ brought it back. This is beautiful, watz.
     
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