Black Poetry : Knockin' on my soul

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What u do fo' me
    cannot be explained
    but whateva' it is,
    it got this girl going insane
    Now I am not a "girl" at the least
    but u gots me actin all childish,
    instead of sheik...
    But whateva "it" is brotha,
    please don't stop.
    Cause this sista' is willin'
    to let you "knock"
    Knock down these walls I mean,
    that past men have bulid,
    I left it up
    but YOU....I am willin' to let in.
    Into my MIND,
    HEART,
    then BODY, and eventually SOUL
    I am liable to grow old with you,
    and just stay happily in love.
    Now I know that this may sound extreme,
    But brotha you have got some kinda effect on me,
    What it is....
    that I am not quite sure,
    because your appearance
    is somethin' I have never Known
    all I know is
    you move me
    in a way none other than before
    so keep on keepin on
    "knockin" on my soul!
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knockin...

    who's there?
    baby come on in
    isn't it a pleasure
    to see you've arrived
    I need you to stay with me all my life!

    I feelz ya!
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock-Knock!

    Now that gets attention--someone is knocking--open the door and let them in--Amun-Ra


    here's one for you to chew on by Amun-Ra

    come to the Forums and comment on Who's Fooling Whom? (Does Religion Work?)

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php3?threadid=1366
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    very nice flow Ladybug
    thank you for sharing it with me

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADYBUG....

    i can dig it!!... betta yet... i can irreversibly relate!!

    yesssss... indeedy!! :)

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
  6. honeyluv

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    sisthagurl

    knock! knock !
    let his *** in
    so he can be ya man
    whatever it tis he do
    let his love be true
    for u and forever hold u
    u go gurllllll!!!!!!!
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Yes
    A good mate will do this
    In a way that you never know
    Knockin your soul down
    Feeling like you never have
     
  8. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REAL NICE HEARTFILLED POEM. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
     
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