Black Poetry : Knock Them Out

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock Them Out

    Wreck minds when I connect rhymes and arrange words
    Use strange verbs to communicate at Haynes see nerds
    Drop their lips shopping cats not HIPHOPPING just trash
    Got hydraulics and class as rhymes form into a solid mass
    Like concrete walls and freaks will fall to their knees fast
    Groove while rapping oceans, move my tongue in a flapping
    Motion like an eagle soar high and ignore any guy yapping
    Trying to battle this, in sick politics my affair is right and like
    The sun glare bright when beating down on heads with hype
    Defeating clowns misled, observe words with care nerds beware
    And pay close attention, stay high post at conventions will share
    Ideas from the Twilight Zone, got written notes and hidden quotes
    Plus gitting dope from pushers that nice stuff, life is rough but hopes
    It get better, according to Nancy Grace the news wild as the jury
    Use foul evidence to free Casey Anthony left the world in fury
    A murder plot filthy but founded not guilty the final straw that
    Broke the camel’s back folks can’t handle the facts Casey got a pat
    On the back, look to the club as a thug smell perfume in here started
    To consume beer think silly drink bud for drinkability thirst never departed
    Girl you have a great butt and mind starting to break up into small pieces
    And it’s all reeces peanut butter cups girl my house on rent and tall leases
    Write legit threads after I go hit on the head with a thrown rock came
    From an unknown spot it nearly knocked me out on the block with cocaine
    No doubt, my paycheck thrill me when cashing it usually kill bills by
    Smashing ****, have pure game have to secure with chain I can’t deny
    on the streets I remain even though I was beat with a cain and now my
    feet in pain from toe jam
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    right off da jump this joint pulled me in and no doubt it was on hit
     
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    I tip my hat to you Rhymebad. Your ability to put social commentary to Rhythm is hard enough, but then to make points like

    "A murder plot filthy but founded not guilty the final straw that
    Broke the camel’s back folks can’t handle the facts Casey got a pat
    On the back"

    make this piece even more tremendous.

    Great Scribe poet
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo rthe props on this for real yall
     
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