Black Poetry : KNOCK" KNOCK" (on love's door)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Knockin))
    Knockin ))
    on ya hearts
    door,searchin"
    like never before
    Knockin))
    open let me in
    can i be
    dat lover
    dat friend
    Knockin))
    wit all my
    love
    every feelin
    GOD
    gave me from
    above
    Knockin))
    wit handz
    of caress
    a mind
    dat wanna
    confess
    a soul of
    gentleness
    a heart of
    lovelyness
    Knockin ))
    in yo name
    searchin
    lookin
    ready to
    claim
    a bonding
    loyality
    respect
    no shame
    BANG ))))
    BANG))))
    KNOCKIN.
     
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    hello

    knock knock

    who's there

    it's $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ who

    it's $$RICH$$........ B :censored:
    yea i kinda had to go there lol

    and you know i'm not mad at the Chi-playa

    :tennis:
     
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    that's RIGHT!

    protect momma

    teach him how to write properly...

    oh...

    templeofhiphop 2009 (expect to c u and keita therewith)

    don't give ur talent to the devil
     
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    wut in da murger troy

    um what are you talking here? you're in the wrong thread

    i'm not telling $$RICH$$ how to write
     
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    To desire to enter that place, but not sure if the door will open. I think most of us have been in that space before. Flow on poet.
     
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    well u know me so'ja i was just knockin away .....lol

    hey miss Lady i got cha thankz for da visit

    sister watz when one knocks often we don't get up to open the door
    is it that we just don't wanna or don't feel da need to !


    y'al heard me !!!
     
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    Nice write Poet, but you know what, when love is ready you won't have to knock, you'll stand in front of the door, and it'll fly open.
    Bless up poet, Love on, yeah, Love On!
     
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    you know sister Lataisha Nicole ya right as they say when the gate swing open walk in !
    Thankz sis for the love and warm words to help me see what's not seen......
     
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    Sounds like I hear a knockin at my door,
    it appears I heard that same knock before.

    I'm afraid to see who's on the other side,
    for my heart can't take another bumpy ride

    Soooo if you feel we still have that special blend
    next time you knock ...I might let you in
     
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    Queent
    There will be no bumpy ride
    Knock knock let me inside
    for this time i'm gonna stay
    listen dear to da words i say

    I know our blend is a great mix
    knockin hard bout to have a fit
    my love is not for kickz
    but one that's ready in bliss

    Soooo Please open da door
    time we have an uncore
    knock knock !
     
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