Black Poetry : KNock, Knock, KNOCK

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  1. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    Knock
    come on open up
    Knock, Knock
    i know your there
    KNock, KNock
    hey i want to tell you that i am sorry
    KNOCK, KNOCK, Knock
    please let me in, i need to be with you
    i am sorry, for not doing the things that you wanted me to do
    infact i regret them
    please i'll do anything
    just let me in
    i don't belong here
    open up before its too late.....
    KNock, KNock, KNock, KNock
    LORD please let me in the gates
    i am sorry for not following the path that you have given me
    i am sorry for lying, stealing, cheating and more...
    please forgive......

    p.s
    if your doing wrong, change your ways
    before its too late and you'll
    be locked out, begging to enter
    heaven.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed knock knock !!
    very well done love this one flow on
     
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    i took care of it for u .....no problem
    flow on knock knock
     
  4. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich
    and much love to you
    for showing a young sista
    so love :shades:
     
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    nice drop....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed most welcome sistah
    check out our teen forum and step
    into the teens chat too at www.destee.com/chat
    love to hear u and have u upon this family
    peace unto u
     
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    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    yo this poem was deeper than deep
    i'm really feeling this
    and you know thats some real talk

    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
  8. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing me some love
    :luvv:
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I really liked this one......nice way to send across the message :jumping:

    Much love :)
     
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    words of wisdom..nice drop...never know when that knock will come
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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