Black Haiku : Knives of light

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  1. dojo54

    dojo54 Member MEMBER

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    Knives of light frighten,
    Cutting into the dark night
    Blinding innocence.
     
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    sharp edge cutting blade
    da innocence blindly hurt
    da sword slash dull pain
     
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    This was too SHARP, dojo, very enlightening imagry. We have to wonder was innocence ever the same?
     
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