Black Poetry : (KISSINGYOUR)VERTICALSMILE

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Images of you replete, with..
    ...Sensations so sweet, I~
    Thought it necessary to put into words..
    ...What my mind had said~
    What my heart had heard..
    ...As I was given access to your womanhood!

    Filled with excitement so raw and untamed..
    ...It 's smelling so good~
    While being visually stimulating..
    ...Yet regal, like the QUEEN of beasts~
    The one who actually RULES the African plains!

    Overwhelmed am I..
    ...To be caught up in the midst of~
    Kissing your VERTICAL SMILE..
    ...Listening through inner thigh muffled ears~
    While with happily clenched teeth..
    Your eyes scream my name!

    I'm passionately kissing it..
    ...With my tongue, probing deep and hot~
    Wishing that I could turn it around backwards..
    ...To lick two inches between your joydoor and navel~
    Flicking deliberately and intensely across that
    "GEE" spot!

    Until all control (on your part) is lost in the
    hour gone by..
    ...Your braids matted to your head with sweat~
    As you finally manage..
    ...To exclaim, OOOHHH OOOHH, M-M-M-M-MMYY!!!

    Making me smile broadly to myself..
    ...Horizontally, no doubt~
    While reveling in the afterglow..
    ...Of the rapture that I have just put out~
    Delivered, unto...into you..
    ...As I stroke your outer thighs, counting the goosebumps
    there too!

    Whereas, I reluctantly leave the arena..
    ...Of your vertical grin~
    With copious amounts of your love liquid..
    ...Soaking my mustache and chin!

    After giving the best of my heartfelt kisses..
    ...To you from early `til late~
    I crawl up beside you,take you in my arms and whisper..
    ..."No need 4 U 2 reciprocate!"~
    As, it's my pleasure, to bring you the same..
    ...And even though love's about give and take~

    I have immensely enjoyed this aspect of the game..
    ...That WE have engaged in~
    And, as your breathing returns to a somewhat normal state..
    ...That you are enamored that I didn't move TOO fast~
    `Cuz good things COME with those whom wait..
    ...And whomever CUMS first gets to make the feeling LAST!

    Saaroncrowell
    04/13/01 all rights reserved

    For my FRIEND whom I have been missing...
    No need to tell whom, as U already know who U R!
    HAPPY EASTER!
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guess I should get a towel....

    <<whew>> ......<<fanning myself>>

    This was a very hot piece
    most definitely lovin' the
    "VeR-tIk-aLLY Correct",
    vertical smile (*aka hamburger buns)
    flow of this piece...
    Well, well, well done~!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DES WAS MOST DEF ON TARGET ....WOW!!!
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For real verse, well droped, great minds
    Thanks
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey you!!!!!

    Now you know you gon get something started up in hea right?!:)


    You'd better be talkin bout' who I think you talkin bout or amma tell!!!!!!!LOL
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FLASHIN BACK

    I know one or two things happened... this piece blew up my puda or i kicked the switch tryin to Hi^5 the screen






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