Quiet Poetry Lounge : Kissing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Warm soft kiss
    sweet as honey
    land on my lips.
    And in my head I hear bells
    and whistles.
    My body well it is
    covered with goose
    bumps and deep inside
    I feel a warm sensation.
    I am not sure if it is you and I,
    the moonlight, or the fact
    that this is the first kiss
    that has me so excited.
    We have been watching each other
    from across the room
    for months now.
    And when we finally got a
    chance to talk.
    And well see,
    You and I have so
    much in common.
    You understand my scattered thoughts.
    We even think the same way.
    So maybe that is why I couldn't
    resist.
    Your kiss takes my breath away.
    I feel as thought I am being lifted off
    my feet.
    I feel helpless
    there is no coming down.
    I think I just touched a star.
    And even though I am a
    control freak
    and I feel totally out
    of control.
    I never want this feeling
    to end.:spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribing this was well done
    da rapture will continue
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was tyte keep it coming and watch some these lips around here :huh: lol I'ma big clown loved it do ya thing
     
  4. thatgirl74

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    Thank you so much for da' luv. :spinstar:
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm $$Rich$$ I anticipate the rapture. Never looking forward to it's end.
     
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    sho nuff and it was be a divine blissful one
     
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    Nothing like that first kiss, liked the way you posed this, flow on.
     
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    That kiss dat touches the hidden spaces of your world. Very nicely written.
     
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    There is nothing like
    the first kiss!
    Oh how I remember!
    Got me smilin
    with my heart!
    Nice flow!
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the luv and support.
    I am glad that you are still enjoying my work.
     
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