Quiet Poetry Lounge : Kissing Stars

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 2, 2012.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At each end of the galaxy
    They begin to stir
    Their brightness still feint
    As the sun slowly turns the other way
    And when all is black throughout the sky
    They head toward each other
    Powered by their light
    Guided by their love
    They meet in front of the fullest moon
    For a midnight kiss
    Lasting until dawn

    be
     
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    such depth. warm with emotions.

    i like it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    glistful joy burst just before daylight,,,

    love the shine of this piece
     
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    Brother Poet Heartbeat,

    Simply beautiful. Every word is stirring...every image lasting. Thank you for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll. This is probably my favorite love/romance poem that I've written. Couldn't tell you why but I just dig it.
     
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    Lovely, Heartbeat,

    Lovely.
     
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