Quiet Poetry Lounge : Kissing Stars

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, May 29, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    At each end of the galaxy
    They begin to stir
    Their brightness still feint
    As the sun slowly turns the other way
    And when all is black throughout the sky
    They head toward each other
    Powered by their light
    Guided by their love
    They meet in front of the fullest moon
    For a midnight kiss
    Lasting until dawn

    BE
    © 2003
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good One

    stars-a beautiful things. set forth on this earth by our Creator--to show us how wonderful and precious his littlest gifts can be. no wonder why scientist look to research them, what can i say--their God's little light to men who have an uneasy mind. many problems are solved by just looking at them change from white -to blue-to red. good topic, wish i could read more, but i got to end this................(keep up the good work):toast:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another Bruce Bruce concore ............
    mo ! mo ! mo !

    dis was beautiful
     
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    Bruce, you know you got it goin' on!

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome poet here a classic of BRUCE !
     
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    Like a breath of fresh air, simply beautiful.
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Classic is right. Man, this is elegant work.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww...

    mmm....








    bruce...

    you write beautifull....






    lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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