Black Poetry : Kissed

HighEmme

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Kissed for the first time
I felt my mind
abandon me
So gentle
that my mental
became merely a rental
and this kiss
was now my super
This
Heart racing
Soul Shaking
Capitivating
Penetrating
Elevating
Kiss
Speechless
as my mind
walloped in mental beaches
similar to tasting
the nectar
of sweet peaches
Tongues tussle
Knees buckle
Emotions huddle
and form an alliance
that only demands compliance
and the only acceptable defiance
is refusing to stop
 
Innocently beautiful. It's extremely important to end the bottom of a poem at the top and my, my, my, did you do that real good with this...

Tongues tussle
Knees buckle
Emotions huddle
and form an alliance
that only demands compliance
and the only acceptable defiance
is refusing to stop


What an experience and you really put the poetics to it well.


Thanks for sharing.

Joyce
 

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