Black Poetry : Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Sep 10, 2008.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What was that, and why did I do it?
    Why did I put you through it?
    I don't want you to misunderstand my intent

    Just an effort to get closer to you
    Encourage desires I hope to brew
    And a little expression to give you a hint

    With your delightful manner you had me
    Then, the way you smiled at me
    I needed to be closer just to be content

    It was a great day; we were alone
    Urges could not be postponed
    I could not be patient for a verbal consent

    Your eyes stimulated temptation
    And I chased my inclination
    Until every dime of my resistance was spent

    I drew you closer, looked into your eyes
    Hoping you would compromise
    To this small portion of affection I'd present

    You showed no resistance to my advance
    I saw pure approval in you glance
    I felt comfortable to go to this extent

    Then lips met, and I was so very lost
    Your lips were so very, very soft
    For me, the brief moment became an event
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Arthur, I liked the way you outlined the elements of attraction and allure that led to that kiss. Loved the detail here poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one to remember and how it all came about was awesome brother A
     
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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwhh loved how you led up to this sweet event for sometimes there is a kiss and then sometimes there's a KISS :love:
     
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    WOW

    ..that was right on point:hearts4:
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is so endearing that first time your lips meet the lips of someone you find very special...Thanks for the love

    Arthur1210
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow Poet. This was a Beautiful Experience that you shared with us Bro.
     
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