Black Poetry : :kiss:

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 26, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So soft and sensuous is that mouth.
    Sugary sweet like cane
    Lusciously moist I'll bet,
    driving me insane.
    A peck on the cheek is nice.
    A smooch can be inviting,
    "Comment allez-vous?"
    French is more exciting.
    Kiss me long and hard,
    kiss me if you dare,
    kiss right on down to my under
    where is your tongue going?
    Baby take your time.
    I love your procrastination
    even more than all this rhyme.
    Back to those two lips,
    Purse them if you please
    the feeling in my fingertips
    has brought me to my knees.
    Bend a little more?
    Baby you're a freak,
    No other soul will ever know
    those lips have made me weak. :tongue:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this be hot sweet and divine
    woooweeeeeeee!!! da lips
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:

    This is a five flame piece. Ran out of propane,or would have given it more.
    Frenching with a warm and sincere kiss. Stimulating every one of your lips.

    watzinaname.. this is the flame!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the much appreciated props, Rich. Figured it wouldn't kill me to go there once anyway. Now that that's out of my system, back to my tamer stuff. :uhoh:
    Hodee you're making me :blush: !!!!!! Thanks for your applause.
     
  5. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know what it's like to see a pair of lips that drive you nuts. nice job.


    Roni :heart:
     
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    girl this was hot....nice nice...
    naw it was hot and sweet...:angel1:
    flow on poet of the week
     
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    Officially Wowed!

    and we turn to the judges...

    the first score a "10"

    the second...also a "10"

    and the final a "10"...


    This was "Awesome".....

    I have never read a piece about the lips... or kissing rather
    that I've enjoyed more....I love the way you crafted this...
    I am blown away...I think I'll read it again!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those lips can be dangerous, can't they? Thank you Roni.

    Thank you Mzblkangel. I wanted it to be hot, but not scorching. Thanks so much.

    Angelicsage, thanks for humbling me once again. Such kind words from a great poet such as yourself.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the taste of your poem still lingers on my lips.......aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad I made a lasting impression caramelpython. Happy Thanksgiving!
     
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