Black Poetry : kiss the kosmos

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    t-minus 9, t-minus 8 countdown to our fate
    well, a date with my mate

    i hate loving you so much
    so vunurable to your touch

    come to my clutch let me grasp your asteroid
    okay, let's have dinner first
    but, my hunger, my thirst
    is not of this plane

    you and i are not the same
    your so cool and i'm a lame

    your so proud and i'm ashamed
    i'm a dude and your a dame

    enough of the small talk, can i suggest?
    that we take a walk while the food digests

    celestial atmospheres controlling my thoughts
    it's getting kinda hot...
    take your clothes off

    i'm just playin', i'm just sayin'
    it's been a long time

    this has been a strong rhyme
    resting on a long chime (ding!)

    as we vibrate into outerspace
    i can feel you girate, i'm no longer irate

    a whisper, then i kiss ya
    spongy tongue touches neck
    touches back, touches thighs
    oh me, oh my!

    your eyes touch the sky
    making music outside
    your herbs and verbs got me high
    stop smoking, she replied

    out of the atmos, the tropos and the stratos
    now entering the galaxy
    seeing stars the most high built
    adjacent to the way of milk

    tippy-tah on the runny side
    means whatever i say
    grammar has no use
    where gods and goddesses play

    just then she said work it
    so i said twirk it
    this ain't a microchip
    and i don't have a short circuit

    your computer might be big
    but, your program ain't perfect
    who said gold is worthless
    come back down

    i see you smile in the moonlight
    no other day will be like tonight

    go back up, take flight
    i got my second wind
    as i kiss your raised chin
    the black hole pulls me in

    i'm lost...and found
    wound up in mars
    where the sphinx was planned

    came down to find my lips
    giving you a cosmic kiss



    Brown Shuga Shane:kiss1:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, Brown Shuga, you out of the stratosphere

    BIG UPS!
     
  3. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought-where you from

    1poso, you from austin?
    i worked at U.T., Greyhound and Highland Mall in Austin, TX
    i lived there for 4 and 1/2 years
    i did shows with people like cappadonna, dead prez, michael rose
    to people like E.S.G. and lil flexx
    i stayed in that 78758 North North
    and on 6th street!!!
    preciate the props
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly enjoying the endearing quality of this piece as well as your creative word play.

    I need to call your attention to Destee's thread regarding our poetic etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896 .
    Please limit your poetic pieces to no more than 5 on the front page. Thank you for understanding.
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn:
    Now this is too cute. You appear to a have
    an exceptional luv affair with words.
    Nouns, pronouns, adjectives, and verbs.
    I bet you don't even have to think the ink just seems to
    effortlessly flo.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet this was hot

    this is WHAT poetry is all about right here

    nice story

    nice pacing you feel me this

    was hot

    very nice

    very nice


    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da scribe here yo pen rockin smooth
     
  8. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol...and you said my bed talk was hot?! I think you beat me hands down! Enjoyed the piece and the rhythm.

    Napturally
     
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    I think that this was sooo cute!!! not in a kiddy way......in a grown up way....LOL, I hope you aren't offended by me saying it's cute poet, I jus really enjoyed this piece :)

    *Sweet*
     
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