Black Poetry : kiss me, sex me, rub me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SkinDeep, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kiss me…
    You know you wanna
    just go on is kiss me
    you know you wanna
    just make me feel lovely
    so baby
    just go on and
    kiss me
    risk it
    and kiss me

    sex me…
    until we can no longer
    come in ecstasy
    come make it last longer baby
    I wanna moan your name baby
    all night…all night…all night

    and

    rub me…
    so you can make feel so [email protected] lovely
    I wanna love you ‘til I can’t love no more
    I wanna be the one
    So no one’s above me
    Kiss me
    Baby…


    …you know you want to…
     
  2. ShayShay

    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dis was hot:hot: :hot:
    Nice flow
     
  3. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Yes, HOooot..keep it coming!!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl!!!!!!!! i didn't know u had this in you! you never even told me you wrote b 4! i love it!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now u showing the other side of ya pen
    i love this flow
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so tight...whew it's getting hot in here!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its hot up in here...
    nice flow....
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot::hot::hot: wow!
     
  9. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody!!!
    this was my first poem i've ever written, i'm glad ya'll liked it.
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    vibes
    lovely flow
    Peace
     
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