Black Poetry : Kiss-Body-Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jan 28, 2008.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote this about my husband, he's in the military and i wrote this when he was deployed...enjoy



    When I wake up...
    Its all about your loving that I’m wanting, and it constantly stays on my mind.
    So listen up...
    Take away the negativity you have about me and my love cuz I.
    Don’t even know...
    What I would do if you were gone, anywhere else but layin' right here by my side.
    Lettin' you know...
    Cuz I think its been awhile since I’ve reminded you how I.

    Crave your kiss, your body, your love.
    Can’t wait to hold you in my arms oh I...
    Dream it, taste it, reminisce on...
    When you were here feeding my appetite.
    Stroke me baby for you only I’ll...
    Crave your touch, your gaze, your love.
    Can’t wait to have you my arms all night.
    Tasting your lips, your body, your love.

    When I lay down...
    At night my dreams revolve around you, all about you, close my eyes and makes me sigh.
    Because I've found...
    That ain't nobody ever gonna take the place that you have created in my.
    Heart deep inside...
    The more I miss you, more I wish you didn't question if I do or oh if my.
    If my heart flies...
    Up into the sky to join yours forever and a day oh baby now I...

    Crave your thrusts, your body so much.
    Can't wait to show you baby how I...
    Want you, need you, got to touch.
    Pleasing you til we both take a ride...
    High into the clouds past esctasy's rush.
    Elevated to distanced levels on high.
    You are my utmost sensual...
    Lovin' that's ever lived in this time.

    So right now I...
    I'm thinkin' ya, dreamin' 'bout ya, your dwelling constantly inside my mind.
    I'll open up...
    Cuz I know I need to tell you more that your my King and that for you oh baby I...
    Would give the world...
    Cuz ain't no other man gonna put up with the ***** that I can put out sometimes.
    And you can stop...
    Thinking that I want anybody else cuz your the only person' who I...

    Crave a kiss from, embody my love.
    Can't wait to sit in the essence of you and I.
    Behind closed doors I'll be what you want.
    Tell me what you need, how you like it and I'll...
    Be your woman, your wife, your sensual.
    I can't convey enough of how I need you in my life.
    My King, My Lover, My Husband, oh my.
    Electrify me, shock me, til we reach the sky...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    True love of a heart so real to it's feelings
    when one lay down only to see it's all about he
    wow what a woman who loveth thy King...
     
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    Diggin' this love story, love strong, love song.
     
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    Wow....LovelyGoldenOne:
    Your piece was so passionate and lovely,
    I hope you sent this to your husband.
    He should know how deep your luv
    flowz for him. Very nice write!!!

    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The strength of your passion for him is so powerful. Such a beautiful pledge of love for your husband...wow.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man feeling and loving this

    he's a lucky man


    peace
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments everybody :)
     
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    I cosign! Nothing like the magic of love and knowing without a shadow of a doubt that there is someone out there who craves and desires you just as much as you do them.
     
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    Hi Sister Lovely
    Just like your name.
    Your poem of love is indeed
    Lovely
    Wonderful flow sis
    feeling all the love and warmth
    in this piece. Keep it coming !

    Peace~N~Love
     
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