Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Apr 23, 2003.
nice flow...keep writin...much love
Butta the depth in this peice is NuTz!!! crazy tight!
sarcasm4eva, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for the encouragement.
Reas, How sweet it is to see you in my piece. Thanks for lovin'it.
Cindy, That's truth. We set the standard on how we are to be treated. Thanks for feelin'asistah
Deep and all so true
well felt sista woooooweeee! u open it up for all to see within
"meager offerings of
semen and moans"
WHADAYA MEAN...meager? gurl, that's GOLD on the dark market.
step to me, my sistah.
PurpleMoons & $$RICH$$, Thanks for feelin'asistah.
Baller, "WHADAYA MEAN...meager? gurl, that's GOLD on the dark market."
You would think, huh? Gold Rush!
You Sir... are too much.
tight .... I do believe that many women settle when they deserve the best ..... poem is short but str8 to the point ... read the message loud and clear ...
Though this peace was brief, it was eloquent and powerful in its simplicity and message. Definitely feeling this joint. Women should stand up and insist that brothers like this be the man they should to her. Flow on!
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