Black Poetry : King Of Punch lines #2

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    King Of Punch lines #2

    Even as a carpenter you couldn’t hammer the grammar
    Or nail the flavor with stale behavior just a sad mamma jamma
    Your use of words is abuse to herds of readers can’t speak or write
    Too weak to fight saw you on the street last night living in fright
    You not thug just a slop scrub say what wanna a girl in the hot tub?
    Not aware of details never share females you be bent in events in clubs
    Look kid you need chrome hummers to get phone numbers
    And love letters from ladies and some Mercedes just a cucumber
    Won’t root her garden

    You rhyme dreary even with Einstein theory wouldn’t be atomic
    With Ebonics so ironic how your formula not supersonic
    Like Walter Payton you falter creating lyrics sipping gin and tonic
    Putting legit restrictions on your bits of fictions rhymes sound chronic

    You try hustles with bad eye muscles you don’t see straight
    And never be great so why debate like a whack candidate?
    Don’t accept bribes but you need help with scribes don’t hate
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LIKES THAT! you keep flowin' like that and i'm gonna have to drop one myself, i was all up on this like peanut butter on jelly......it was a delight, drop another brotha...........i'm listening....... :court:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey MADD ya flava is divine bruh u
    keep bringing da lyrical magic
     
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    lilcherry76 and rich thanks for the props for real yall
     
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    yo MADD, I truly think this is one of your best ones yet. I'm like, wow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya off the hook man don't u even stop blast it
     
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    GEMPIS AND RICH THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS
     
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    Love these two lines... :smokin:
     
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    angelicsage thanks for the props for real yo
     
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