Black Poetry : KILLIN ME SOFTLY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If eyez could kill i'll be dead
    for the look u give is sensually bad
    If words was a knife
    you would cut me deep
    for i love it when your body speak
    when u walk my knees get weak
    your smile and da way ya sway sweep
    inside my heart it skips a beat
    then thoughts begin to leak

    Killin me softly !

    I treasure u for who u are
    see i found you to be da brightest star
    center stage shinning wit delight
    now my love must put up a fight
    but your magnetic forces pulls me in
    I can't hold back , I won't defend
    take me sweet lady , just take me then
    for it's u that my love lone to mend
    to be complete let us blend

    Killin me softly !

    :help:

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    Sounds like "You got it. You got it bad!" LOL!


    This read like you were pleading your case to take it to the next level. *wink*

    Great piece, Rich! Even if it was game, it was smoooth game! lol
     
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    When someone draws you in so forecfully, I suppose there's no holding back. Well flowed piece poet.
     
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    cherryblossom.....it is what it is and what it has done the forces pullin me in to da next level ...smile

    yes watz like no hold bard !

    Thankz for the visit within ladies
     
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    Great Flow Bro
    Keep putting in time to win!

     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes playa

    :bowdown:

    let 'em know
     
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    yo i might have to get out the kitchen all this heat up in here

    Brother Rich keep it movin like soul to soul
    meaning this peace really moved me

    fiya!
     
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    U know i will HODEE.....gotta put in da tyme to shine inside her glow ya know...


    Man so'ja ......U know me i gotta push forward and to the limit

    Hey Miss Lady happy this was able to move you in my direction

    Thank everyone
     
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