Black Poetry : Killer Devil

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KILLER DEVIL
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    Devil, you killer!
    Let's genuflect...
    As the Spirit moves,
    We hunt and peck

    God bless America
    Save a mortal man,
    The devil's...
    In the detail,
    Of our Savior's plan

    Word to the mother
    Who lost her sons,
    Murderous devils
    Are on the run

    Turf war devils,
    Hustle where we're at
    Black on Black, (demonic)
    Bustin' caps

    Eastside <> Westside
    Homicide...
    CSI sci-fi,
    Glamourized

    Killer evil doer,
    Here comes ((THE SON))
    You running out of time
    Before your reign is done


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so real so true
    $$RICH$$ love what u do
    tell da story say it all
    get ready sinners
    our LORD call

    very nicely posed
     
  3. Khasm13

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    true indeed

    gastly ghost gails glamourized
    by dastardly demons with durty eyes
    when will they learn(probably never)
    that evil in the end will always get burned...

    well felt scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, check the edit-
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UPSTAGED

    gastly ghost gails glamourized
    by dastardly demons with durty eyes
    when will they learn(probably never)
    that evil in the end will always get burned...

    Thanks Khasm13,
    That was too nice!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies and Gentleman, my friend... Khasm!
     
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    I,m feelin that one. Spread the word poet.
     
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    Bless this Destee Camp... thanks, PurpleMoons!
     
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