Black Poetry : Kill Me Wit Yo Luv

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My body aches 4 da softess touch,
    I yearn more as tha passion erupts,
    I take my time, 2 make things more explicit,
    As i'm feelin yo luv, u start to kill me,
    Burn me wit yo passion,
    My heart desires 4 it,
    I'll be here beside u,
    Workin my way into u,
    Me pressin against yo body,
    U startin 2 get me more aroused,
    We can keep dis a secret,
    Since nobody else is around,
    It's just me and u,
    What can i do 2 please u,
    What can i do 2 tease u,
    In all da right places,
    Dat u neva have thought of,
    The sweet aroma of da inscent,
    Burns within my soul,
    Kill me wit yo luv,
    Slowly, but gently,
    Hold me tighter baby,
    As i'm feelin da motion,
    Spark da flames so high,
    Until my heart no long desires,
    Luv me slowly,
    But easily,
    Kiss me all over my body,
    Make yo strokes da hardest ones,
    Kill me wit yo luv,
    Until i can't take no more.:heart:

    Aaliyahmonet:):love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!! R u sure ....
    nall
    i can't do dat !

    liked dis here...
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U so silly rich:) Keep yo head up.

    1 luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    Kill you?

    I die a death in killing you
    for my body aches with your sweet pain
    as you so skill-fully ride me
    into a death defying ecstasy
    a realm or utter indulgence in..... us

    us

    two so closely melted into one
    'cause the hot fires of our passion
    have evaporated self
    and so we simply melt
    into each other.
    heated thrusts
    luscious licks
    pulverizing penetrations
    until there is nothing left of us
    and we die a death of erotic pleasures
    just before the sunrise....
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooh... i'm tellin! :lol:
    diggin this! :spinstar:
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my god, **** klabarron u kinda deep there. Hey wildflower, i think we need to watch out for these guys.:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww this is special feeling this piece especially the part where you said


    "Make your strokes the hardest ones
    Kill me wit yo luv
    Till I can't take anymore"
    Feeling this
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    4 sho Desert Storm, keep up da good work.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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