Black Poetry : Kill Me Love pt.1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Prince Yakeem, Jun 26, 2005.

  1. Prince Yakeem

    Prince Yakeem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say you cannot live until you die..it's time to do some dying

    Dreaming
    Gets me nowhere fast
    To my foes with no class I toast my glass
    Let go of the hate that we had grasped
    All in the past now let’s fall till we crash
    Melting dreams became hellish schemes
    Lost childhood in a jaded scene
    Raised in a daze the maze of death
    Was a wild hood wolves howl and spill blood
    Brown men dead before they knew life
    Never given new life only no love
    Pain consume the night souls were stolen from above

    I lay awake tonight because I want you to kill me
    Plunged into darkness yet I still see
    Looking back we had some good times
    Mostly bad times soul did release sad rimes
    With each breath world gets colder
    Flesh gets older kids gets bolder
    The last of days so devils get desperate
    So please never let the rest slip
    Remember we used to bless the tip
    Of a sword and it sliced through me
    Eagerly, everything’s going black
    I wonder what we could be

    Or could have been for this is my end
    Peace to all my family and past friends
    Sorry for the sorrow I did not want to die
    We outlaws must fall I think you understand why
    Stay blessed and never regress
    What's done is done no need to add on to my mess
    So kill me that is if you still feel me
    Know that as long as you live I shall BE


    "I do not wish to fall in love, nor stand in love with stealth; I shall become love and be one with my creator and everyone else" – Prince Yakeem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up this was a awesome deep piece i hear ya Prince............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You put some intense feelings out in your scribe. Flow on poet.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Die with honor and live with fear ~

    I enjoy your work.
     
  5. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooo Prince,
    this piece blew me away
    to catch me again
    at the end of the day.

    I can't find the words to let you know
    so all that I can say
    this was beautiful.

    :heart:
    moham
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i just went on a awesome poetic ride....nice vibe feeling ya flow

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    you got my speechless........this had to be one of the best poems i have ever read. please continue to flow, for your words are definately engraved in my mind, deep poet...please continue!!!!!!
     
  8. Prince Yakeem

    Prince Yakeem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... I'm honored by these replies. Many thanks
    I'm only as good as those who understand me.......

    guttapoetfromny..i'll never stop
     
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