Quiet Poetry Lounge : Kiesha's Birthday

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    [/FONT]Rain,
    all day rain, and clouds
    and headlights
    twelve noon
    the two of us leave the real and return to euphoria
    with a kiss, a slight scratch on my love's ***.
    intimacy
    shared persued
    craved like crack cause my love's
    given something she couldn't take back
    I'm addicted, conflicted and caught up
    in love with.......... :hot:

    the rain outside this hotel room window seems peaceful
    far away from the deeds of last night
    we made love,
    I saw a tear fall from her eye,,,,,,,,,,,,,
    and watched my love sleep
    heard her whisper "I love you"
    then morning came
    and the rain was gone.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nicely done love the way it rained out
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed so nice...
    enjoyed the read
     
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