Black Poetry : Kicking Lyrics

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 1, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kicking Lyrics

    On the streets with truth and like a weak roof your brains
    Can’t bear the strain of this plain weight you’ll break from pain
    Like the heavens cloudy and proud and like a rowdy crowd
    my thoughts are borne back by the police all my facts loud
    and bring no peace molested and arrested thrown in jail
    strong and still prevail without bale the warden said I failed
    the piss test not allowed to smoke dope so I’m locked up
    and can’t get out, wanna be a glad minister but like a bad senator corrupt
    and my resources has forces against the legislation pledge to a nation
    to correct the economy and protect astronomy by being a star in a constellation
    of burning planets while learning to be romantic by using love talk
    write and gouse gas on a lighthouse just to make it shine bright then walk
    and rhyme tight, stay in the lime light of rappers write on tablets with chalk
    like hoodlums I seize folks and squeeze throats and rob them of cash this
    is a job with no class so I’m involved with a trash career nothing is brisk
    about this, like a pilot I radio my landing and stay with the flow demanding
    attention not to mention some hot replies and not lies it takes planning
    and yall behalf, my type is stronger and like hunger bring out the beast
    in men then feast with Gin and chips and begin with scripts that’ll bring peace
    a art master my heart beat faster twisting vapors just find missing papers
    listing skyscrapers trying to climb to the top because my rhymes hot like wafers
    by Nabisco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drippin'em spit 'em droppin 'em hot on da spot for a shot into stardom

    Lyrics all dat and some
     
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    rasembi aunk Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhymebad be that brotha on spoken word,
    Showin' up those fake poets who're token nerds,
    Who are on the radio feeding me shid, that's why I'm chokin' turds.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kicking lyrics seem to be artform for you. For you mastery of word kicking seems like a free flowing genius. Well done my brother
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS TO EVERYONE HAD TO DO THE THING
     
  6. Cade Foster

    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't believe people are actually saying good things about this piece, it was horrible and by no means spoken word, it made absolutely no sense whatsoever. Atleast be honest with the guy, because lying to him just allows him to proceed looking like an idiot while thinking he's good at what he does. No hate to rhymebad at all, but you really need to work on making sense when you write, so my best advice to you is that you take a couple of months off to practice and come back when you feel you've elevated your skill level.
     
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