Black Poetry : Kicking Life's ***

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 7, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One day somebody's gonna kick life's ***
    I for one can't wait to see it happen
    I want to see life dust itself off and move on
    I want to see life cry in the night like we do
    Life is gonna reach out...
    And no one will be there
    Life is gonna say "I'm sorry"
    And no one will care
    I can't wait to see life feeling sorry for itself
    Walking around in a daze
    Cause it don't know what to do

    Since time began
    Life stood behind its famous calling card
    "That's Life"
    But for once
    Just once
    I want life to hear those words
    After it gets chewed up and spit out
    Life needs to know it ain't that easy

    Life is a bully
    Unchecked and unremorseful
    I want life to suffer heartache and feel pain
    Turn the tables if you will
    Only one way to deal with a bully
    A good *** whippin' will do life some good
    I'm bad enough and mad enough
    I'm gonna throw the first punch
    See how life likes it

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat!!!

    i got your back i got your back :lol:

    excellent flow

    :)

    pd
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    question is

    WHOSE life is going to get the shiznit kicked out of it ???
    lololol
    can get deep with this one !
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks PD
     
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    Heartbeat ... this is too cute ... I was laughing at the end of the
    first read ... ready to respond ... but wasn't quite sure why I was
    laughing ... so I had to read again ... it was this line ...

    I'm gonna throw the first punch ... :lol:

    whispering to Heartbeat ... folk have been put in rooms with
    padded walls ... for much less
    ... :)

    Thanks for this one

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee I've been in places that have those rooms..... People in them don't care.
    Thanks for the read :)
     
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