Black Poetry : Kick Rocks Potna...This Is Fiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So..... I see you been creepin round Ms. Parkers backyard,

    Why she can't look me in the eye, she see me, then get outta dodge,

    Now, I understand why she actin' like we friends,

    Borrowin' my clothes, sashayin' by all slow, askin for $$ to lend,

    She looks at you, then at me, then back at you again,

    Ol' dizzy c0ck-eyed heifer, should've worn her ***** out way back when,

    I seen them scraggly size 10 drawls, spilling from under the mattress,

    Mines an 8, guess bigger is better, I'll admit she was a great actress,

    All them days, many of men been trying to holla at this,

    But, silly SPICY, way too devoted, the Love Boat I surely missed,

    Now my eyes are opened to the SNAKE you turned out to be,

    Now you can pack yo sack, beat yo feet on the concrete, get ghost, leave me be,

    Gwon with Shanquanthe', hope you enjoy her 4 baby daddies,

    Cuz last I heard, they do Bonnie & Clyde's on every fool to enter her panties.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece poet, it surely pulled me in...thanks for sharing
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O.k....

    'Preciate it Queen, you know I love the Brothers, just a flashback:angel1:
     
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    I love the sisters too.
    Nice flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa! dis was hitting .....
    sound like a pt.2 to this poetic drop
     
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    That was tight!
    Flowing like a river girl!
     
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    alright now spicy love the way you pen flowed once again. flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Lies hidden in disguise
    I love the flow poet
    Much Love Sister Spicy
     
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