Black Poetry : Khasm this 1 is 4 u but every1 respond plz

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When times got hard, I will not lie and say that I did not turn against you.
    When you disappointed me I was quick to say you weren’t worth ****.
    When my luv for you was strong I was jus what? Anotha one of your hoes?
    When you begged me for forgiveness I laughed in your face.
    When you tugged on my clothes, I ripped them to be free from you.
    When you would attempt to kiss me I would turn my face so you would always hit the air.
    When you ran out of gas on I-285 do you think I was just coincidentally busy?
    When you touched my waist I would jerk away not to tease, but because I was disgusted with your touch.
    When you hit me time and time and time again and I stopped crying, it was not that I had gotten used to it, it was because I had decided I wasn’t gonna take it no more.
    When I said I luv you and I still did even if it wasn’t as strong as before, what did you say to me? WHAT DID YOU SAY TO ME??

    Ya’ll take it from here. Ladies add on, men I do believe ya’ll kno what to do.

    :toast:
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is so difficult...
     
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    oh ok serenti
    you set the stage on that one...
    let me think for a moment
    and get in that frame of mind...
    that last poem took a lot out of me...

    i'll be back
    peace
    khasm
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew! now dat's hot!
    do the thang Serenti!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmm hummmmm!
    u said it so clear and wit power
    let it known !!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    serenti that was a powerfull message
     
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    please excuse the brashness of this scribe
    my mentality was taken over by my alter ego
    krack...

    your askin whut i said
    ha ha hahahahahahaha
    well im bout to tell you cause im feed....

    like new edition said
    "sunny days
    everybody loves them
    but can you stand the rain?"

    obviously not cause i've felt mad pain
    so much pain that i refrain
    from feeling any more
    call me the true essense of hardcore
    i gave your girl some
    and she keeps callin for more
    remember when you slammed the door
    in my face
    cause i had no loot to give
    towards your expensive tastes
    i would try to open up to you
    but it would always turn out as a waste
    i'm no mr nice guy
    and im not even going to front
    but from my eyes you aint no lady
    your just another stunt
    im looking for a grand slam
    when your just a bunt
    your quick to bring up when i hit you
    but remember when you cracked me with dat skillet
    and turned my brown eyes blue
    and when i got fired from my job
    cause you came up there actin a fool
    you aint bout to take me to skool
    cause i dropped out at 17
    i really wanted things to work
    but your @ss acted so mean
    tellin all our biz to da neighborhood barber
    wonder why we don't have as much sex
    it's cause you got swole like nell carter
    always having to barter
    loot for love
    that's why when you asked me that question
    i just shrugged

    and laughed....
    hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

    whatcha got ta dat?
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Cindy for your put in I like that

    Khasm you got me thinkin man gotta sit on this one might take me minute but I'll be back ta show you what I got until then peace ya'll
     
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    Following the lead!

    Communicate This!

    You have the nerve to say to me
    that I don’t communicate enough!
    you made a mistake, by leading
    me on this roller coaster ride then
    to my surprise you up one day
    decide you don’t want to talk to me
    anymore, But did you bother to
    tell me, communicate any of these feelings
    to me? no you assumed that I was
    a mind reader and “Oh well” I would
    figure it out! but yet you call your self
    a man, who has the nerve to say you
    want a real woman, “Well let me tell
    you a thing or too, you would not know
    a real woman if she was starring you in
    the face, “what you need to do is learn
    how to be real man take some classes in
    communicating with people. You see
    you have done me a favor by walking out
    the door and letting the door hit you in the
    ***. I am so much more worthy of what you
    could possibly ever give me, so I say good bye!
    “Hasta, La Vista Baby” now communicate that!

    AqueenPassing
    2003 All rights reserved

    http://www.aqueenpassing.com
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, i don't feel bad. I couldn't think of nothing and I was going to post that I couldn't think of nothing, but yall beat me too it....LOL....i still can't soo.....there ya go. Yall doing the da*n thing though!!!!
     
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