Black Poetry : KEVIN, a poem of love

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Across the room,
    he came,
    illuminated by
    the glow of
    a harvest moon.

    Luxurious
    he is
    in the suit
    of his birth.

    Soft dark hair,
    muscular all over,
    full down where.

    Into the warmth
    of his hairy chest,
    I collaspe.

    I almost faint
    from his ever
    so gentle caress.

    His name,
    Kevin,
    I call
    and fall
    into a sense
    of Heaven.

    Deep within,
    he soothes
    my every need
    and all my greed.

    Fervently,
    I moan as
    he takes me
    further than I
    have ever been.

    I am alive again
    with long since hidden
    fevered emotions.

    This glorious
    reawakening
    of excitement.
    I owe, only,
    to him.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE READ

    Your KEVIN is tight!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is--------undescribable.....1 word 4 u......DEEP.......
     
  4. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, 1poetsought,

    Thank you! :)
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi lilcherry76,

    Your praise brings me much joy! :D
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    sounds like kevin got u opened, (smile) tyte!
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi PurpleMoons, :wave:

    Oh yes!! Thanks for commenting. :)
     
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    well NOW!!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love how this flowed!
    very nice!
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Bishop, :)

    I am only speaking the truth!! Thanks for commenting!
     
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