Black Poetry : KEISHA JUST WANTED TO BE LOVED

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  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    KEISHA was lookin for love,
    love and affection though all she found was men with an errection,
    Between her thighs they unwrapped her surprise over and over agian,
    Leaving her with nothin but a rag to wipe,
    Along with an empty drug pipe,
    She cryed with tears of lonelyness and heavy sorrow,
    But in deed lookin forward with tryin agian tomorrow,
    Everyday she got on top and she rode it like a soldier,
    she told them all I LOVE YOU
    something her ma ma never told da,
    KESHA learned the tricks and da trades to make them naggas feel good,
    The compliments of her head game was like da little engine that wished he could.
    In another life If I was a good man I would Have step In oh yes I would,
    KEISHA should have used protection on all her loved ones oh yes she should,
    With an I.V. in her arm those naggas had lost there charm,
    With tha lost of her hair,
    Strugglen to breath her own air,
    For every pain that came was from some nagga hittin bare.
    Who loved her when she was dying?
    Right then she notice no one really didn't care.
    They say you cant turn a *** into a house wife.
    But what If you was just lookin for love and it took away your life.
    <Some advice>
    LOVE self first and protect your self right
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice message!
    Very touching and real!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good message...i liked this poem...
     
  4. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: If we dont keep it real then who will?
    Thanks for da love
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice way to spread the message.
     
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    feeling the reality and truth in this message
    continue to bring it like dat ! tyte drop.......
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As some things in life don't warn a second chance, I compellingly salute this piece of art. ^5 to you poet, your lines drained my heart...Peace to you
     
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    You told the tale so well, I felt the ache, deep. All we want is love, some unfortuantely die looking for it. Superb writing.
     
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    love the way you expressed the message in your flow, flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Ultra Smooth
    Heart felt and deep
    Wow your deliver and message
    Wow-Nice Poet
     
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