Black Poetry : keepin it real.............

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So..... what's the dayum deal with it?
    You know you can have me anytime, anywhere
    all you got to do is ask if you want this fit...
    I mean being for real with it.....
    I come 'fa sho' with it.....(lol)
    You know I don't play games and so tired of the flings,
    I am just enticed about the "love jones" thing,
    So tried of the aggressive sex,
    just want that sensuality with every trip!!!!
    Don't get me wrong I want my back broke in,
    but I want the emotions involved in the end.......
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man..do i ever feel you on this piece you just wrote....who doesn't want the emotions in the end?>>...:)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!
    dis what u want wooooweeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know gurl but its SO hard to find one WITH the other :)
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i want this too....and i'm with triniti, it's very hard to find...much love to you for this piece.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't get me wrong I want my back broke in,
    but I want the emotions involved in the end.......



    How I do wish the two were "twins"....:wink:
    you said it all with that...
     
  7. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys.... At first, I wasn't feeling it but hey.... it is what I want....(lol)
     
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    nice flow ..feel ya
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u crave u shall get !!!!
    becareful what u ask it might
    come to ya doorstep and let u have it .........
     
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    feelin' you...and i'ma guy.....this piece is really real...
    you speak for thousands that choose to stay shut.....

    one love...
     
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