Black Poetry : Keep The Candle Lit (FreeStyle Version)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Oct 15, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i love to write poetry
    its' become my sanctity
    no way no pun intended

    did you give me this gift
    its' been deriven from a
    higher power during my
    early twenties

    the stress and strife of
    college life brought me
    here making this transition
    into adulthood through my
    Lord and Savior Jesus
    Christ whom shall i fear

    i love to write poetry
    its' become my sanctity
    no way no pun intended

    have you brought me peace
    of mind and tranquility there are
    greater heights at elevations
    you haven't even seen

    like Destiny's Child i'm my
    number one priority when its
    all over please get up and
    leave

    i love to write poetry
    its' become my sanctity
    no way no pun intended

    did you raise me preparing
    me for what lies before me
    i just received another offer
    from a Fortune 500 Company

    what kind of plans do you
    expect from me?

    but i love to write poetry
    its' become my sanctity
    no way no pun intended

    did your plans ill-fate me
    what you got to say doesn't
    bother me one bit

    keep the candle lit





    Destee el Mi Familia :love:


    *yes, i even speak Spanish*


    :kiss: lana1287 productions :toast:
     
  2. Queen_of_Spades

    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the imagery that you displayed.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic Delight.:) I didn't know u knew spanish either. I'm scared of ya'll, just kidding. I like the flow of dis scribe poet. Keep flowin:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow and all but mine wasn't about you.

    peace...
     
  5. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peediddee.


    this heah... hot like candle wax! & umm...
    no pun intended!! :D write on, chile! write on...

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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