Black Poetry : Keep n mind ima youngsta in this poets tree...

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  1. Ipifene

    Ipifene New Member MEMBER

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    Ip¡fené


    As I shovel and delve deeper into these roots known as the poets-tree
    My knowledge of self grows to be
    More of an even greater test to me
    So out of my quest and thirst for knowledge
    I attend this new college
    The stronger I strive to gain perspective and realize
    That my perception leads me to contrive
    For the next high in my minds’ eye
    As she opens wider so that I can inhale her smoke
    Choke, Choke, Choke
    My mind and chest open as I take another toke
    And as I scribe this pen to paper to invoke
    The dialogues that were spoke from my subconscious state
    To my self-conscious fate
    My mind slips into this fury state
    As this revelation is revealed to me
    Inspirations of who I am to be
    And the fight from whom I claimed to be
    Watch out—
    Here it comes me…
    Another **** ÏPIFENÉ
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay ÏPIFENÉ :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    There is nothing "youngsta" about your flow
    if you hadn't told us we'd never know
    for wisdom of years flows from your pen
    and I'm just glad you came on in !!!

    Thanks for joining us and please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Hey!! welcome within

    welcome to da playground of Destee's place
    welcome to da flowz of many shows
    so glad gurl ya step right in upon dis house
    of family & friendz see sistah u be kin now!

    so out of flyte upon u IPIFENE
    i send u love from da $$RICHNE$$ above
    i love how u laid dis to canvas & open self up
    continue ya flow so we can know
    welcome sistah friend of mines :kiss: :heart:

    :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :star: :heart: :jumping:
     
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    Ipifene New Member MEMBER

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    Much Love to Destee and Richie Rich for the blessings you all have bestowed on me . Peace:kiss:
     
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    you got third eye wisdom chille
     
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    sweety, your flow is mature!
    i'm diggin it, anyway ;)...
    welcome to the house. -7:spinstar:
     
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    loving the river you've flowed through the playground...that we might get a look at you.

    THANK YOU...AND WELCOME to the playground

    {all up in the name of you.:)}
     
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    most welcome sistah Queen
     
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    Revisit ..........of a youngsta in the poetic tree !!
     
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    :bowdown:


    THIS WAS GREAT!

    And I really liked the "Poet's Tree" metaphor!...Sistah, you got a BRANCH all by yo-self! :toast:

    But, then, that's what happens when you got GOOD ROOTS! ;)





    And :birthday:
     
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