Black Poetry : keep it moving?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by verse, May 2, 2003.

  1. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad it's over
    a weight lifted off my shoulder
    and chest
    no more "what if it dont work", no more anxiety and stress
    I'm glad there's no more burden, no more financial concern for her
    I'm glad for no more drama - if i choose not to come back with the burner
    I'm glad there's no more focus on time or the fact that it lacked
    No more you on my mind with thoughts I'm holding you back
    (No more me between your thighs, no more you on your back)
    I'm glad you're free from some of your past
    I'm glad we're friends, maybe we can at least try to make that last
    It's funny how one thing can phuk up the game
    We process it differently but the result is the same

    If I'm so glad then why do I already miss
    the sound of your voice and the touch of your lips
    Why are you still on my mind and I long for your kiss
    If I'm so glad why take the time to write this down
    If I'm so glad why am I crying right now

    If I'm so glad why do I feel like I'm losing

    when we both agreed to

    keep it moving?
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you fake what you feel,
    you know what is real.
    stop playing games,
    you know that you'll always stay the same.
    you mention how your glad,
    but why are you crying over what you had?
    you are the one,
    that said it was done.
    your tears are of the past,
    like a 747--ya'll love crashed.
    give up what you think is lost,
    and risk getting it back at all costs.....
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay Verse :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thank you so much for joining us and sharing your flow. It's beautiful. Please make yourself at home, because you are. Perhaps we will have the opportunity to hear you speak this peace on the mic, in our own live voice chat of course ... www.************ :) Hope you'll join us there too!

    Again, beautiful work. Thanks.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    because when you love someone hard and give them your heart...and things don't work no matter how hard you try...you just have to survive and keep things going...and heal each day, sometimes knowing that the person will always have a piece of your heart and each and every day you feel anger and left out and lost and abandoned -- and even though you know it's for the best...you do what you have to do -- i think it's called life versie.
     
  5. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true indeed red...true indeed! that really sucks tho!
     
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    thank you.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    verse

    This poem is very nice.

    I too experienced this. I was :mad: and I wanted to :spank: her, but I knew that was a :nono:. So, instead, I was :cool: about it and :wave: goodbye...and kept it moving. :D
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sad poem...........i feel u, much love........... :)
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this hurts me to read cuz i definitely feel the need to share my feelings of loneliness in a marriage that has been robbed like a babe from its carriage....hold ya head and dont stop the love we need u....
     
  10. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall. i know i aint the only one to go through this but it hurts just the same.
     
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