Black Poetry : Keep file folders like wild soldiers in the field of administration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 11, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep file folders like wild soldiers in the field of administration
    Deal with intimidation, enemies use the process of elimination
    Flow pride and rap that’ll provide crap for brain such as knowledge
    Enter notes in my winner quotes then secure textbooks from college
    Book articles even shook particles of newspapers the headlines
    Had everybody drinking redwines keep print of threads divine
    Walk steady and stay talk ready keep my vault sweaty with cash
    Protest by marching and flow best while watching that TV trash
    Got hardcore dames like the moors in spain one hour of dispute
    Leaves a sour fruit no settlement could even twist a recruit
    A black cherry on a whack ferry to a brisk boat ride never stoop
    Wreck my fate to decorate an empty room have a wimpy tomb
    If I pass today it’ll be malnutrition it cause foul friction and doom
    Inside my body, nowadays home quicker drinking strong liquor
    My dome slicker than John Travolta in the movie grease, once picker
    Of cotton now from bottom to top like Hiliary Rodham’s flock
    Cause slim static at a democratic level nowadays need a **** plot
    Marathon is a plain in Greece and it remain in peace while the Olympics
    Remain intact and it games attract folks from around the world only wimps quit
    Keep crews in mystery microphones carry news of victory freestyles are legit
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rhytmic stream of bold expression, makes me remember why i love poetry
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pulse of your lines are intense rhymebad.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi rhymebad
    Your verbs and nouns spit much knowledege
    We do need to keep records for the next unborn
    So they can know what went on.
    In the real time.Very Nice Write

    Peace~N~Love
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks for the props on this one yall really feeling it now
     
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