Black Poetry : K I N E T I C

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I stay in motion
    maybe I won't have the notion
    to sit here and pine away for you...
    to miss you so much.
    In desperate need to have you here
    frustrated and berated in shedding these tears
    hoping for the impossible---
    still daring to hold onto my dream.
    Dreams of finding one like you...
    if I can't have you,
    at least I could have a facsimilie.
    In the end I know it's groundless
    and just a fanciful illusion,
    because noone else can do
    what you do to me.
    Spoiled and soured for any other man
    I fall in awe in between your verses.
    Heart beats in the 2x2 time of your name,
    pulse thumps from the kisses your lips disperse.
    So maybe if I stay in motion
    my heart will quiet and become still
    and my mind will be too busy occupy thoughts of you.
    Maybe if I keep moving, my soul will be able to untangle itself
    from motivations of dwelling with you...
    maybe if I keep in action
    I will finally muddle my way through
    the hopes, yearnings, delusions, and dreams
    and just come to accept
    that
    there's no way of escaping you
    or stopping this friction
    our dictions
    has created
    in the cosmos...
    pure kinetic energy.
    ┬ęcopyright ambroziya snow2001
    all rights reserved
     
  2. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya on this one. Great scribe.
    One_Love
     
  3. hypersleep

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    moving

    moving with you

    moving with you

    moving with you


    you do
    things to me


    oh girl...you
    are supreme.

    can you tell i can't breathe?
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know StarGoddess...my back is getting sore from bowing to you fro your work...but here we go *bowing*....
    great scribe queen do yo' thing.

    blak
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVEDID IT!!

    SGS...

    all i can say is "Yessss!"

    this one... i felt deeply...
    flow on sister dear... flow on...

    PeaceInAllThings...
    Sunshyne
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man

    i read this on thought i was missing someone, good piece, definitely felt the feeling
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya know!Star,
    I've had similiar situations,don't rush,take your time,and good things come to those who wait..,there is a blessing waiting right around the corner for you. I see it up ahead in the distant! Keep shinin Goddess. Blessed multiple in store. Count it all joy!
    Desert Storm
     
  8. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    u know....
    i can't tell yall how much i look forward to the replies and suggestions up in here....everyone always shows me so much love....


    and hyper...suga...
    thank u eternally for all da inspiration u supply me
    i am blessed by ur presence

    *singing the solstice song*