Black Poetry : just writing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm just writing whats on my mind,
    and right now, love is on my mind.
    theres this guy that just blows my mind,
    about 6 feet and **** he fine.

    he's that special kinda guy,
    his eyes are dark brown,
    his lips the color purple,
    he's a black man.

    a strong black man,
    with big, strong hands,
    i wish he could be my man so bad,
    he's that special kinda guy.

    his eyes never tell lies,
    he gives that sweet, warm forehead kiss
    with lips so vulumptious,
    he hypnotizes my body.

    **** this man so fine,
    he makes my body grind,
    my juices start the flowin,
    he got my eyes glowin.

    i'm just writing whats on my mind,
    and right now, luv is on my mind,
    i met my black man,
    and **** ain't he fine!!!!
    :love: :heart: :love:just writing
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** girl make that MOVE ! :thanks: for sharing... i think you really should make that move though :) :heart:
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanxs yah glad to know yah feelin my verses.
    ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed enter the mental of dis guy
    sho him ya mental thoughts
    move smooth and sweet
    do ya thang sis.................
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes plzzzzzzzzz make that move gurl


    and then let us kno lol


    luved it
     
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    feelin' your flow fo show
    and wishing you the best!
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall all so much
    i'll keep an update and let yall know :)
     
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    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flirt:Get him before someone else does gurl!!!;)
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ;) you better believe i will!!!!
     
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