Black Poetry : just writin

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wind chills
    as the sun hides
    and the skies turn black
    within its no reach
    searchin the dark
    destroys
    and life dies…
    as a rose folds in a corner…
    whisper here and there
    for the soul is so dirty
    as the tears fall from the sky….
    Within folds of all told…..
    Born alone you die alone….
    Fallin
    Fallin
    Fallin
    towards the black
    hole as the earth
    turns gray within
    the orbs the stars
    are out and the
    ground shakes...
    as the moon takes cover
    a closed in prison you made
    as you lay alone in pain......
    of fear that your life is endin
    past time drinkin and party
    all your life....and never gave thanks....
    a hustler all your life....
    wheelin and dealin
    lyin and schemin on the
    ones who loved you
    but you didnt know any better...
    now you lay alone
    to die alone......
    how you gone hustle
    ya way out of this
    after 15 years in the game
    watchin your brothers
    die to save ya being....
    now its your turn......
    as the sun hides
    and the skies turn black

    dont ask just writting....Peace Angel thang
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister this was dark...
    but a deep reflection
    of the true end...
    makes you take note
    of how you live your life
    this was truly emotive...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep darkness cover
    i feel ya on dis as i
    know the pits of fallin
    i've hit this hole

    speak on just write
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: whoa girl, this is insanely good. wow, wow, wow
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep, I must agree it can make one relfect on life, I'm diggin' it
    Thanks for sharing
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew, wait lemme recuperate....
    this piece flows nice
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you are doing more than just writing..
    whew...
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice scribe...
    karma's a byatch...fa sho
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just keep writin', cuz I'll keep likin'.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage...thanks my angel sister...for understandin this write.
    your words always mean alot.....

    $$RICH$$....i think at one point or another we all get the gloom in our life
    thanks for yur reply

    gempis...thanks sis

    arthur1210..thanks fo da read

    rahstagal.....thanks glad ya likes....

    deepy....lol thanks for the love...

    Khasm13...indeed it is my brother thanks for the read and support

    PositiveMindset...fo sho my brother thanks for the read

    Peace to all yall
    Angel
     
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