Black Poetry : Just Watch Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 5, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shhh... Just watch her as she strolls in
    Its as if she walks in slow motion and spotlight follows her grace

    Just watch her, her skin shines with such beauty that can never be defined or replaced

    And those eyes hold more vision than a prophet itself
    Goodness... they keep calling my name

    The sun has nothing on her smile, it shines and brightens my day
    ... I've got to be the reason why it sets

    I've seen all of God's creation, but none have been built like she
    Oh naw... she's a precious jewel

    Her body is a temple that I want to praise and worship

    Her voice is as smooth as dark chocolate and as soft as a whisper
    ...I've got to be the reason she screams

    Her
    My mind is twisted and my heart is open
    As I watch from a distance

    Just watch her... I'm blessed just to be in her presence
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice....
     
  3. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's beautiful. I'm glad you recognize the shine of a woman....whoever she may be.
     
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    nice piece...watchful eye..keep it coming
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed so beautiful of she keep watching
    shhhhh! u see wit an keen eye.........
     
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